All Comments on 'Topless Jen Ch. 02'

Vacariously written by young Mike, wishing he was a Michelle no doubt?

Using every excuse in the book, Jen had no qualms about exposing her shaven clitoris, albeit expressing crazy desire not to expose her vagina? I wondered at that one! Mike should be aware Jen was exposing her vulva, as it is impossible to expose a vagina unless religious female circumcision has been ordered by radical Muslim degree, in my decade long absence from writing erotica!

This is an awesome story. I hope you continue. I cant wait to hear what happens next. Thankyou

Art

The first ch. ends with the crystal's promise to be bottomless next day. It would be fantastic. I love bottomless stories. I dream of crystal in the very crop top only next time. Greetings.

very silly. I just hope that not all American girls are that shallow as depicted by our writer. A big fat zero for imagination; one star for the effort.

The same scenes just kept going on and on. I really wished that the park would close earlier or the security guards would kick the girls out.