All Comments on 'Torgan Wine Ch. 04'

I am really enjoying this story. The clash of cultures, the relentless desire they have for eachother.. Keep it up. :)

So many red flags when it comes to Draeseth's actions. Not an enjoyable read as it seems to be a litany of coercive control behaviour. It just keeps getting worse by the story. Love is not jealous, controlling and possessive. Domestic violence perpetrators are.

There are a lot of red flags but, and like, I don't mean to be spoilery or anything, the more you read the more you'll see it's not relationship goals or built to last. If you keep reading, try adjusting your expectations a little and you might enjoy it more. The characters are flawed and issues abound for all of them. It's part of what made it fun, for me anyway.