All Comments on 'Torgan Wine Ch. 13'

A little less treating like a recalcitrant child. That is good. All these customs and cultural etiquette are confusing,but the misunderstandings and differences drive the story. I eagerly await the next installation. Five stars,as usual!!!

Because of Isonei's sweetness and her giving nature, those around her often underestimate the depth and power of her character treating her carelessly as a superficial coquette. There is a steel core to her that always startles when glimpsed. She may bend, but never break.

This is where the whole story falls apart... if you are thinking isonei's gift thing is the beginning stages of character development in-between her and draeseth uderstanding and growing into each other well let's just say you would be dead wrong. I'm on chapter 30 and I had to stop because it had become so upsetting. Isonei just refuses to make any attempt to understand draeseth's culture. Furthermore the author doesn't give draeseth and intellectual ability to explain himself or make any attempt to humanize him up to the point where the entire story explodes. Sorry for your sanity stop here