All Comments on 'Tormented Ch. 04'

I am loving this series so far, the romance between Ryan and Lily can really be seen but you can also see their demonic side in some of the sex scenes. Hope there is more to come!

Just read all the chapters posted and I like them. I like the plot and characters so far. Love how you write your dialogue. Looking forward to future chapters,well done

I just want to say thank you to everyone who has stuck with Lily and Ryan so far. I know their past took a while to come about (pardon the pun) but I really hope you have enjoyed them so far. There is still more to come which will explain more about Lucy and the divide of the Angels and the Fallen. Thank you again for reading - Fallen

I love the friendship that is shown between them, how comfortable they are when they're talking and joking together is what true love is. Can't wait to read more next chapter please!!!!

im really enjoying this series, the reason for her leaving is very sad and you can really feel the pain when there apart. i hope they can find a way to be together, normally dont like the romantic stories as much but this one has me hooked!!!! need the next chapter!!!

Thanks FallenTreasure! I am really loving this series :)

Thank you so much for all of your lovely comments! More has been posted and I hope you continue to enjoy my story! - Fallen x