All Comments on 'Tormentor'

Great story awesome start NEED MORE. I was very impressed and hope that you continue this.

The switch from nightmare to lover was so sudden and less than well explained, I found myself wondering if I had started on another story entirely. Why the years of terrors? The whole thing seemed meaningless. Don't get me wrong, I love the imagery and premise; I just think the short could have been an order of magnitude more powerful. Maybe by not making the daemon out to be as caring about Terry's feelings and/or leaving it more inhuman and nightmarish once things turn sexual the shift would be less jarring. That, or you could stretch the changes out over another 20 chapters. hint hint ;)

The abrupt change of pace had me momentarily confused, but I like it. I can see how this worked, and id enjoy more unique stories like this

A very clever tale, imagining what is going on in the mind of a mentally ill person.

This story was a really awesome read. I hope you decide to continue with this story down the line

Teaching lust and sensuality to a deamon what a great story.

If I wouldn't have a lovely and sexy wife I would want a deamon like Terry. ;)

Thank you.