All Comments on 'Total Career Wipeout Ch. 02'

I liked this one. I thought it acted more as an extended epilogue to the first part rather than a complete story in its own right.

I think you've got a real knack for writing in a style that is distinctly British (this coming from a Brit). Definitely want to see more game show ideas. How about one where the girls more directly compete and can set forfeits for each other?

this one was a real disapointment as the previous one was so great.

Better luck next time.

I'm very grateful for all the comments on my recent stories. I should point out that, after editor Robertreams fixed the stories for me, I did a second re-write which is why there're still grammatical errors - I am currently going through correcting these.

On the forum, my private message address is switched on if anyone wants to post longer comments/suggestions - it's always great to hear from other fans of the sexy tv show genre because it's such a niche interest!

I loved this! Really don't see enough of this sort of humour on here.