All Comments on 'Total Power Ch. 00: Intro'

That about covers it.

Ignore the troll...always the same dismissive crap. I suggest you provide e description of the domme and tell more of the story outside your own head (If that makes sense). Otherwise, not bad for a start. I think you have more in your tank (4).

This is a very good start for what I believe you said was your first. However all we know about the Domme is that she probably works in an office, not whether as a secretary or a high powered position and the way she likes to dress in a scene. A little more on her would be great and we know that her slave submits willingly but is also scared of the unkown, not afraid of the pain he will endure and can't control his orgasm.

Great story. More chapters would be good.