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ordure [ˈɔːdjʊə]

n

1. excrement; dung

2. something regarded as being morally offensive

Where exactly does one go to purchase a ticket for one of these maddeningly erotic excursions? My bags are packed and ready for the next Total Woman experience.

As you might know or not know Spell checkers check if the word is a word NOT IF IT IS THE word that goes with the though the writer is putting down. In other words, if all you are going to do is find miss spelling THEN STOP READING HERE. I find mastakes all the time and correct them on my copy. OR BUTT OUT... JUST STOP IT... GO WRITE YOUR OWN STORIES ..... go find some other site to correct... PERIOD ...

I constantly try to improve my writing and appreciate any and all feedback. Even with spellchecker and re-reading my drafts several times, mistakes still creap in. Thanks to all for helping me get better.

"ordure" = vocabulary show-off

"though" = hypocritical troll

"creap" = seemingly-innocent, but sarcastic/patronizing irony

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creap:

1) a cross between a "crepe" and "crap"

2) a crepe filled with crap

3) also a metaphor for someone who looks tasty (like a crepe) but is full of shit (crap)

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