All Comments on 'Total Woman Horizons Ch. 01'

Nicely done Bhuff. Initially your eloquent title "Dusk" had me thinking this was your final installment of the TWA tales. Or at least the retirement of wizened sexpert Ned. Sorry to see Kellie go but enjoyed her sendoff. I also appreciated your use of several unique synonyms. Solidity and shuttles were two of my favorites in this story.

Be assured I'm not a sycophant and my comments are not clumsy attempts to induce your contributions. I simply recognize that good writing is difficult and requires effort for even the most talented author. My comments usually are an acknowledgement of an author's skills and endeavors and of course my gratitude for sharing them. Though you are well aware occasionally I am guilty of shamelessly requesting or suggesting plots as well. Please don't consider it a knock on your efforts but rather my selfish wish to read more about some of your characters .