All Comments on 'Total Woman Legacy 04'

bhuff, now THIS is your best story of the year. I enjoyed and admired the Hitchcock styled ending. Your story's conclusion was masterful in all aspects. I found myself imagining the airborne team challenge evaluation assessment activities that Monica would experience. These ribald musings equally pleased and frustrated me such that I am requesting a sequel detailing Monica's inflight experiences. I ask that you consider this not a selfish request but rather a testament of my appreciation and enjoyment of all your stories, especially this one.

Constructive comments are always welcome. I'll try to weave any suggestions into future stories.