All Comments on 'Touch of the Ocean'

by AquaticDreams

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blackdragon54blackdragon54about 9 years ago

you dont read a lot of mere folk stories, good to read one. Especially one that is happy. keep it up :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Now, THAT is a mermaid story

Mermaids are my favorite fantasy, and this story has it all...right down to logical anatomy. I got a full erection, and I'm almost 70 years old, 69 to be exact (pun intended). Keep up the good work.

DarkPulseDarkPulseabout 9 years ago
Excellent

I enjoyed the read, this is some awesome stuff! Interesting interaction, good details, and a nice change from the norm!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Very well written

Your story flowed very nicely and you conjured up very vivid pictures in my mind with your descriptions. Well done.

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