All Comments on 'Touch Therapy Ch. 01'

I really like this plot! Unique, very well written, I love your flow, almost seemless going from one character to the other.

Thank you for posting the next chapter so quickly. The story is so unique, very impressive work. Can' t wait for chapter two.

Wish it was longer, by another page or two, but if it means a quick turnaround to the next chapter, great. Looking forward to how the entire family deals with the change in the relationship.

Really can't wait to see where this story goes, like the others said it's unique, i look forward to reading many more chapters :)

Another compelling chapter of this story. Definitely a unique story and characters with depth and I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the great work.

Please keep writing, you are one of my favorites already.

I agree w/ all here so far, unique but what a great read. ty/ bill

An unusual story but very well done. You show a lot of promise. Please continue the series. 5 stars

Very well written. looking forward to more stories.

Unique

I have to agree with the others in that it's a great story and very unique. I like the way you show the emotion of Rachel as she struggle with her inner feelings and fears. Keep up the good work and hope you continue with the story for I can't wait to find out what happens next and what the Doctor has to tell Rachel.

Have read a lot of different authors on this website the past few years and frankly cannot thing of any better writing than you have shown in your two submissions. Hope you will continue this story and will also look forward to new ones.

This is great. On all levels (layers), like internet connectivity.

Thanks for sharing.

But I know what will happen. Just like KICKSAVEANDABEAUTY, this author will disappear.

Because he is so good:

A wealthy sheik will sign him to an exclusive contract. Or

A wealthy sheik will simply kidnap him. Or

He will be hired to write TV sitcoms.

But, please, could you at least finish this story?

Please?

Ignore the idiots.

They can't really read; they just post canned comments full of invective.

Don't rush - it's great so far - but make sure you finish before they come for you.

ps

If they get you before you finish; could you sneak a few chapters out to us?

Obviously, I really enjoyed it,

Resolver

Please dont leave it here!

reading this left my mind begging for more, good work. would love to see it continue

This story is probably one of the best i have ever read. I hope you continue to write them. They are phenominal.

I really enjoyed these first two chapters and am patiently waiting for the next one. I only hope that I don't have to wait for too long. :-)

After reading so many thoughtless stories here, it's refreshing to read a story that grabs you be the short and curlies and compells you to comment. This is, by far, the most provocative material on this site. Keep it coming!

It took me a moment to figure out that the first three chapters are numbered 0, 1, and 2. Read them all, in order. It's worth it!

with those who have been complimentary about this series. It is quite well written with enough "foreplay" to arouse a great deal of interest. Thanks for a good yarn.

The characters felt real, the emotional states, the love and caring, all translated off the page. This series was very well written

it is SO refreshing to read a story here that's so well thoughtout, conceived & paced.

the characters seem REAL & the situation seems REAL.

Thank you. So very well done!

Real and sharply defined, emotions raw and thick, great story.

JT

This is truly a great story. Very well written.

I am reminded by this chapter of the Sally Field movie "Sybil". The resemblance is due to a thought I had while watching the movie: how can you trust anything she says when her actions stop matching her words? When her emotions change too rapidly to track? When the cause of the changes aren't obvious?

I will continue to read the next chapters being glad that I don't have such a person in my life that I must deal with.

Very intense.