All Comments on 'Touched by Moonlight Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Loving it

Very intrigued. I have not read touched by lightning so I'm very curious to find what exactly a sacred maiden is.

RheamistressRheamistressalmost 9 years ago

Love the way this story is developing... Looking forward to the next chapter. :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Really

Are they really so caught up in, 'saving the other from the pain,' that they don't notice how shitty they are being? Hmmm!!! I'm on the edge if my seat..... I want to shake them both and scream at them to wake up and take a chance...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Unfulfilled potential

I read Kissed by Lightning, and found your writing style and descriptive abilities to be good, but the plot, and particularly the ending wholly unsatisfactory.

I have tried this continuation, and again like your style, but not the plot. Unfortunately I just don't like or have any sympathy with the main characters. You said in your introduction that things would get more positive. I wish you all the best, but it has taken too long to get to anything remotely positive in your writing so far, so I wont be reading any more.

angeldustjaangeldustjaalmost 9 years ago
Please!!!!

Please don't leave us dangling for long. I loved KBL and now am intrigued by TBM. I hope Katrina's affection is reciprocated.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
impatiently waiting

I try to be patient but always end up getting impatient, especially when it's a good story. I love a good love story and I love your characters so please continue add quick as you can get them finished. :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
I can't wait any longer!!

Please update!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
I love it

Please update! I can't wait to read more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Please write more

It's absolutely amazing! I can't wait to read the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
MOAR

I really hope you will be continuing with this story soon! It's is absolutely exquisite!!!

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07/14/2022 Hey there, I know it's been a crazy time for everyone. I'm hoping very much that you are all healthy and safe during this difficult time. One good thing to come out of quarantine is time. It's given me a lot (a lot) of free time to write and edit. Though, now I ...

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