All Comments on 'Toy Box'

Im really new at this and any feedback would be greatly appreciated. Thank you.

I would love to see a part two of this!

Other then a few grammatical errors the story was good. I hope part two is even better

I really liked it, a part 2 would be awesome!

Omg this is so hot. I love the plot and everything. I loved how the tables turned. Kinda funny towards the end when the guy was like you're crazy. Lol.

I was surprised to find this was your first submission. I look forward to more from you.

Silly story of a girl who could not find a way to get what she needed. And wanted.

This was a great little story. Hope you will continue.

Still a hot read though.

So you say you're new to this huh? My god this story was beyond amazing! The turn of the tables concept was brilliant,oh dear lord....,especially when she wrapped her legs around him and encourage him to keep fucking her! I was sooo aroused buy that point and when she sensed he was about to cum,wrapped her legs even tighter around him,I came so hard it was like the Forth of July or something lol,

Thank you for that,you're writing is superb🙌🏽🙌🏽

That was a fabulous story. So glad I found it. I hope you got through the pandemic and will write more like this story again!