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wanderinggipsywanderinggipsyalmost 7 years ago
As for English written by a native German...and your first attempt at story writing...thumbs up!! :))you absolutely rock!!:))blackmailing is an endless sadistic hobby!!;)) forever searches new victims!!;))so only dumbass girls hook up with blacmailers aft

Cute as the story might be our German lit friend..;))...girls would not get off on thoughts of a hook up with the blackmailer,after she gets her stuff!! ;))unless she is dumbass!!;))no matter how much she lusts and obsesses over him!!;)) ....coz she would know that blackmailing is an endless sadistic hobby!!;)) always thirsts for new victims,and never gets cured!!;))

And hiding cameras in trees in public places?!;)) what if some tech wiz stole them while you were at the movies, wisecrack?!;))...

As for English written by a native German.....and first attempt at English story publishing....thumbs up!! :)) you absolutely rock!! :))

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Hello everyone. I'm a writer who is commited to using non-defamatory language in his stories. I started writing this way when I had read too many stories that had used too many harsh words. Erotica aren't my only pasttime, I enjoy writing fiction and fantasy as well. When I'...