All Comments on 'Toyboy and His Women Pt. 04'

5ed and favourited,

I did enjoy the storyline. There were elements in your story that struck a chord wit me hence my scoring and favouriting. I also think that your writing has improved over the 4 parts, though I think it would be even better if you showed your characters feelings and emotions a bit more.

Thanks Honey, for the advice and rating. It is nice to know you liked it, and maybe my characters will have more emotions in future, hopefully. :)