All Comments on 'Track 001'

That was a very intense, upsetting but brilliant peace of writing well done

Love it! Im happy you put this out. Intense, tragic, and heartfelt.

Beautiful story.

But the subject is tragic and terribly sad.

This is definitely one of the best stories ive read on this site. No happy ending, no muscled bodies fake smiles. A story of love and passion with a real twist. You have a fan my friend

It was such a tragic story about love found and lost. It told the story of countless men/women I'm sure. So many young people who probably signed up for the military not knowing what they were getting into really. It is sad that so many in our military are spat upon by the actions of people in their own country...and like you said, those people can act like that largely b/c of that military. Fiction or not, it also is a view into the lives of people in many countries targeted by their own people for their beliefs or skin color, etc. It is sad. I think we all know people are fighting in these countries but we don't think about what it is really like. I think this is a good way to make us think. Thanks for the story.

This was just beautiful..probably one of the most realistic stories here..thank you

Thank you. This beautiful and heart-breaking. Until this country learns that we are NOT the only people on this Earth and learns that a human's skin color or whom they love is NOT a major crisis to be fought over, then we will NOT survive.