All Comments on 'Track Meet in Purgatory Ch. 01'

good use of the landscape as a background, interesting characters.

Applause.

As stated above I have enjoyed this tory immensely despite my initial fears that it'll be too bland with all those descriptions and rather long build-up. But now I just love it and must admit that the whole build-up process with very (sometimes a bit too) detail depiction of landscape, their actions, their progression of relationship and life together became the best part of the story. It gave life to the characters, made me part of the story rather than just a bystander. Sure the sex was cute and all but it would be a meaningless romp without the background. Befitting the nerds status they actually made a decent job of their first lovemaking, though some serious practice might be needed int he future. The story has some serious potential for a long run and I'm very much looking forward to more, and somehow I'm sure the parents wouldn't be so much opposed to them living together now that they finally found each other.

Gave you a 5* without a second thought.

Enjoyed it tremendously and gave it a well-deserved 5!

As has already been said, all the back story really added meaning to the sex scene.

I will be on the lookout for further chapters.

-Rei

Thank you for sharing your story. Five stars

Adorable first time story! The only thing I'm hung up about is the fact that we don't know how they get out! Is there more? Please keep writing!!

I really like this. A sweet and heart-warming story. Might want to tone down the use of the exclamation mark a tad, though :p But that's just an inconsequential nitpick.