All Comments on 'Tradition and Triumph'

Very well written indeed, and very credibly too. Thanks to the author.

I liked the way he took baby steps... the way he describes her body and her urges... very good.

"Now she was single and I somehow gained access to her inner circle of friends."

was chuck the reason she was single,or did her husband die ? my guest it is just a story and his fantasy , as INDIANS do hold through in bad times in marriage's.More so where they are far away from family.

His relentless manipulative, affection-free mindset is profoundly distasteful. There's no solitary mention of any nonphysical attribute of his prey. Each story element concerns seduction tactics, never a mention of hoped-for human connection, much less love. Of course the protagonist is an invented fictional construct. Unless he's meant as a cautionary object lesson in male triumphalist belt-notching, the author's inadvertently outing himself as souless creepazoid.