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by slimpic11

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Good story...

I like it, and it was certainly arousing. Good story as well as very erotic.

However, your dialog is stilted. Nobody says, "I guess that is correct." Try, "I guess that's true." People use contractions and slang. Keep writing.

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