All Comments on 'Trailing Home Ch. 02'

Loving the slower progression for this story. It gives us time to know the character, test waters, so to speak. thanks again

I think your story is great! I can't wait for them to get on the trail. There is going to be so much suspense. Keep up great work!

Dear Lady of the Harem,

I applaud you for the way this story is going. And fast submission too!

Waiting eagerly!

John

now i must hurry to read on. Thank you for allowing us to read you. You only get better with each submission. respectfully fan in Texas naynay

Guess I don't need sleep. I love how you are writting this story. Read Second Chances today (all of the chapters) and now have moved on to this one. Can't stop so guess I'll sleep tomorrow instead. I feel myself really getting into this story and feel like I can actually see the characters in the environments that you have written. True talent. You have a great way with words.

Does Liam alway become Trevor when he's horny and his wife sleeps?

I doubt that the historical details are at all realistic, nor even the reactions of the love birds, but the story is pleasing and the typos are few.

a pleasant reading. . Thanks for your effort with the story.

But i don't like this kind of marriage.

I love how this story is being spun. I hope they can work out their differences and stay together.

this is a mighty fine tale -- told by a mighty fine writer. Again -- my thanks!

was a lot more difficult back then. You've painted a fairly descriptive version of what it must have been like to make the trip. Two strangers in a cramped cabin isn't going to make it any easier--now that they are man and wife.