All Comments on 'Trailing Home Ch. 06'

I am enjoying your story very much.

Boyd

I have been dying for them to finally consumate the marriage and look forward to many hot scenes. On a personal note I hope Natasha has something bad happen to her. Karma!!!

finally finally finally...gawd i love this story, can't wait to read on. With all the awesome authors on this website i hope you know your growing into a well loved and known author who can be sure when her nick is seen...her stuff will be read by many. Best wishes and keep on writing we luv ya. respectfully. fan in Texas naynay

Wonderful, and they got together at last, really.

I couldn't rest had to read it in snippets during decorating the tree!

Have a Merry Christmas and a Wonderful Happy New year with lots of writing for US!

John

Liam and Selena waited to make love until they were ready and really knew each other and loved one another. I wonder if she could have enjoyed it nearly as much if she had not told him about the episode with her step-father trying to rape her and given him a chance to get to know her after he knew that.

Hooterhunter

it was getting to be borinnnnnnnnng what with all the almost sex ( spoil the otherwise good writing) and we are to believe a lusty man just miss out so many times to bed his wife,come on buck up

was not that great,after all the misses.too much delay.

I\\\'m surprised at the few negative comments here, this is a slow-building story focusing more on character and story setting than sex, so it does it\\\'s job perfectly. If you want hardcore porn, look elsewhere. This is erotica at it\\\'s best.

PS dunno why each time I use the apostrophe it adds slashes?

The writing and editing are at a professional level. Well done!

Finally :) Loving this story.

Can't wait to read on!

the denouement! How sweet it is! But wait -- there's more...and can't wait for that either. Haremgirl is one awesome storyteller. Words aren't enough to express my admiration. And once again -- thanks for this memory...

We've been waiting--chapter after chapter. Finally, they've consummated their marriage. What a relief for them, and for us. I hope Selena is pregnant from her first time.

I have a feeling there's a lot more to this story, however. Natasha is still out there somewhere, and as long as she is, there's going to be trouble.

Finally his wife! Well done, 5 stars!

Roguish grin,

Wicked grin,

Mischievous grin,

Rakish grin,

Raising a brow,

Waggling brows.

Etc, etc.

So much corn, one would think they’re travelling through Iowa.

I’d feel really stupid doing any of that to indicate how romantic or horny I felt.

Nonetheless, an ok tale. For Literotica, both spelling and grammar are way above average. I would have enjoyed reading it even when still a pre-teen.

At the same time, too many procreation hopes expressed universally (..’’and raising a family’’). To each his own, I suppose, except that we have a serious human infestation problem on our planet, and it is killing it. Moreover, we’ve been at it for centuries.

In conclusion, you NEVER ‘battle the current’ when swimming for shore. You swim directly for the shore, even as the shore is moving by...just one of several physics misconceptions expressed here while being in trouble on the water. Not uncommon.