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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Threw the sweater on the seat?

How does he take off her sweater over her cuffed wrists? It would get stuck at the cuffs unless he cut it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
this was good - short and sweet

maybe stretch out the story telling, but definitely write more

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