All Comments on 'Training Ch. 24'

by bonnietaylor

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

You started if off great in get mom and son together. But adding another male made it sad. Somewhere along the line mother will let a male have her and the son will not approve and she will lose him. It made the story better when you let the three woman go. I hope going forward you just kept mom with just her son.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Once again.

You've done it again Bonnie, another great chapter and another great sex session. If they need another large male maybe the doctor would suffice. He seems to like his sex also. I'm sure Dhea wouldn't mind either(being included). Keep 'em cummin,ciao.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Once again you done it !!

You are just that much closer to being committed into asylum for insane.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
dear annony!! I'm still not in the nut house.

but I'm sure that you wrote the comment from one Only an brain dead asshole would read 24 chapters and bitch about it, and stay with a story you say you "hate" this long if you weren't a dim witted crazy!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
A new man

And the chances for disease grow as the story folds.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Dear annony!!

the only disease around here is you and your dumb ass comments. gave this a 5

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