All Comments on 'Training Day'

Sensationally written,,, obviously 'Mark' would have been rich pre-2008... but alas, in 2012 he is probably poorer than most of those he let down with poor advice...

I can often tell stories written by women, since they focus on the general build up and anticipation of physicality rather than jumping straight to the main event. The other thing i have noticed, is that oftentimes the woman in the quickie scenario is depicted as a slut or low if she has a chance encounter vs. men being depicted as taking advantage of a fortunate opportunity. Lovely!

Always good to get feedback. I understand the the cloak of anonymity for those that are shy but feel free to get in touch through feedback with discretion assured.

Not sure what to make of your comment though since the story was not written by a woman. I'm all male, but I take the comment as a compliment that my style has something that stands out from the crowd.

Great build up to the main event x2!!!!!! R U doing a follow up??