by darkoverlord6
Hi, I really enjoy your stories that I've read so far, enough that I went to your page to find more which is something I rarely do. You have some very unique plot lines and although there are a few typos they aren't overly distracting.
There is one thing that does keep interrupting the flow of your stories for me as a woman, one very specific bit of imagery which you've used repeatedly. I don't know if it's because you copy and paste portions of the "naughty bits" and it's just a typo, or something else entirely.... but the g-spot is inside the vagina, not the clit, even though your men keep finding it there.
Anonymous -Sorry if it seems like I confuse the G spot and the clitoris. I should probably be more clear on that imagery when I am writing. My viewpoint actually comes from a long string of discussions I had with some friends almost twenty years ago over the existence of the so called G spot. Several of the people involved worked in the health care industry and they argued that the G spot really just an extension of the clitoris which extends into the vagina and not a separate entity. When I started writing I went with that definition so I often think of the two things as being interchangeable and don’t pay attention to which I am referring. I realize that for a lot of people these are very much accepted as two separate things and thus how I present them can be confusing or at the very least jarring if your used to a more traditional definition. I will try to take that into consideration when I’m writing in the future. Thanks.
Very Hot story! Five Stars worth. Hope you continue, does she get pregnant, does her hubby find out She's cheating, or does she leave hubby for John's big Johnson? Please another chapter or two.
Eh. Not your best. You’re a good writer, but this one is below your average. 3 stars at best.
This Guy has to Roofie a women to have Sex .. Take a Baseball Bat to Him ....
I don't like drug rape stories. Husbands have killed for less. Marriages don't need this. It's hard enough to keep them together without some big-dixked asshole forcing himself on other men's wives.