All Comments on 'Trainingware Pt. 07'

by diriger

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
More!

Please post the rest of this story. So wanting to continue this journey that is so well written that I'm right there with David and Judy. Bravo!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
editing error

Several times throughout the story, you have mixed up Judy for David's sister Gwyn. You should edit this error for future readers enjoyment.

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