All Comments on 'Trainingware Pt. 09'

This was a great story, with so much more potential to go! Please, even though this was part 9 of 9 planned, please continue it! You are a very talented writer, and it was really a very cool story! Please continue it!

Brilliant ideas. Brilliant premise. I commented some on earlier parts. There are a few places in this story where Gwynn becomes Judy and in part 8, Hubba becomes Hubba 2 and again, in other parts, characters were swapped around, etc. I would suggest editing the parts to correct these things from the beginning - but don't change the story! It was well told, had logical paths of development, plausible reasons and motivations, excellent and VERY inventive back-story and this deserves to be a novella, really. I've never even read a novella on here, but the possibilities for development and for this story to become a romance of the first order between David and Judy and of course, some extremely habanera-hot deviant sexual play could well make the best case I could think for one! I thought at times, that you might fall into the trap of making a political statement, but you didn't and you used those opportunities to re-enforce and solidify your back-story yet further. Overall, WELL DONE!!! Please continue. If you need to, make it 50 parts - if that's what it takes to bring this wonderful tale to a fulfilling conclusion. Please write more!

This is Diriger responding to public comments 1 and 2 on Pt. 09. First of all, thank you for your positive comments. I'm glad you liked the story.

For commenter 1: I have proofread in great detail, but I would very much appreciate any detailed corrections you could make, e.g.: places where I mixed up names. Hubba 2 is the new version of Hubba that Judy is using for herself and David. I will search for Gwynn becoming Judy, but appreciate any other references.

For commenter 2 and 1: I do have a second sequence of submissions for Trainingware II, and will put it up in about a week. I have Traingware III (the last) fleshed out, but it needs a lot of work, and I don't expect to put it up before next summer.

I was -so- excited to see that you planned on posting additional chapters in the Trainingware story...until I saw the dates. I hope they do get on the site, at some point. It would be fantastic to see how everything turns out. I agree with the previous commenters. This is one of the best, most in depth story I have read on this site, if not -the- best.

Disturbing. You're obviously very bright and put a lot of thought into this. I hope real life treats you well.

Something serious must've happened in the life of the author of this tale, for which I am very sorry, because this was an unusually perceptive and erotic kinky story. If the author had been able to deliver the parts two and three that he had envisioned, I believe it would have become a renowned erotic classic.

Very disturbing story on so many levels.

Really enjoyed the story! The multiple points of view, sharing of perspectives, and internal monologues of the various characters, I found both enlightening and creative. I’m honestly surprised there aren’t more comments posted here. I do hope the author will continue this compelling saga!