All Comments on 'Trans-Can'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Pretty hot!

Pretty hot story would love to read more. Maybe even some anal between Dad and daughter. Keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Trans-Can

i sure enjoyt the story and would like to hear more about this story and wonder what happen next and keep it up good job and i rate it top 10 :D

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Excellent!!!

I loved this story. Thank you for sharing your talent!

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Trans-Can

Oh, if only you were my daughter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thank you for an excellent piece of work & an even more enjoyable erection.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
HOT!!

UR STORY IS HOT AND SO R U!

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Very hot

I hope this isn't the end. Obviously the daughter needs some serious fucking from her Dad, especially in her ass. But then so many daughters do.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Continue, Please

I want to get into Myrna at this point too.... Outstanding, but do not end it here...

MFDMFDover 19 years ago
Cliffhanger!

I really like your work. It's reaches that mental spot in me that needs a good scratching, but I can never reach on my own. I look forward to more.

BaribrotherBaribrotherabout 18 years ago
Great story

Another fine peice of work. I know I said it before, but Keep it coming. Your work is well writen, and you just place us in the stories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Great Tale

I loved your Trans-Can story. It does cry out for a sequel. You have a really great style. Thanks for your stories and for sharing your very real talent.

Don-DonnaDon-Donnaabout 17 years ago
Girls doing shit hole stuff together???

Not any girls I know--Guys may love a cock against their prostate gland but girls don't have one.

A girl would know that

DONNA

litpervgrrllitpervgrrlalmost 17 years agoAuthor
Girls doing shit hole stuff together???

Well thanks for the comment Donna. I would have preferred it if you'd only posted your opinion once, and I might have phrased it differently too (it's actually kind of a bummer to run into fecal matter back there, but I admit that it does sometime come with the territory).

As far as your comment goes, well I don't have a prostate gland so I guess I'm just a pervert. But I'm ok with that.

A

oldwayneoldwaynealmost 16 years ago
Really Good Tale!

I thoroughly enjoyed your Trans-Can story. I agree with previous comments that this is a story which really should have a sequel. In any case, it was a fine tale! Thanks for having written it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Great story, but...

WTF?? Why does there have to be a pregnancy involved??? Fucks up the whole story!!! I know its your story, but in my opinion, the story had so much more to offer in the way of really cool endings....ANYTHING but a pregnancy!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
I've always loved Canada...

I tried to give this five stars. I accidentally hit the first star and it froze there! I could not make it register five stars. It is worth MORE than five stars, but there it is, stuck on one. Maybe you could paste these in. (:-) **********

Loved the simple plot. Loved that it didn't turn into a wild and unbelievable orgy. Glad the friend is pregnant so there'll be more. (Send mom off on a long business trip to Patagonia. Did she fall off a glacier? Oops!)

Georgia in Seattle

bLoner1964bLoner1964almost 7 years ago
Lucky dad....

A truly beautiful fantasy... Please continue, this is so beautiful

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Brilliant story loved the twist at the end with potential for further parts

dirtyoldbimandirtyoldbimanalmost 2 years ago

all good except the pregnancy and if the girls are lesbian then 1 should assume their not on the pill. Dad should have pulled out and cum in his daughter's mouth, LOL

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