All Comments on 'Transformation Ch. 03'

THIS STORY IS GETTING MORE AND MORE INTERESTING. THANK YOU FOR SHARING.

Awesome story, keeps getting better. A few typos here and there, but definitely still good. Good work. Keep it up.

Thanks for the the feedback. I self edit and do try to catch all the typos but occasionally they will squeak by.

I'm glad people like the concept and hope everyone is getting as much enjoyment reading this as I am writing it.

i like this story more chapters please

About 20 yearss ago the G Spot was considered a myth, like the clit before it. I think it would be awesome if you slowly added current knowledge about the Female Body.

Also, this is a wonderful read. I hope there is more to come.

I really do not read a lot of Sci-Fi. Thanks for sharing this is great!!

Brilliant clever twist ending leaving me curious

I died at the ending and definitely has me curious. I am enjoying this story but I would have to suggest an editor. I have noticed a number of ? when you should have used a . instead. Also minor spelling issue such as 'I got my' instead of 'I got me'.

Unless she got an iPhone. No real tech geek who does not work for Apple would find it attractive with all the abilities available in Android.

Don't get me wrong I'm really looking forward to seeing where this goes as it's been excellent so far, well paced and not plagued with a bunch of misspellings and/or poor grammar. ( The types of errors that tend to yank the imagination out of a story.)

What a story it's been too, however one gets only so far with the sexy bits, as sexy as those bits have been..!

Throwing a bit a curveball here as a cliffhanger/hook is just brilliant.

Well done Chromex.

I stumbled across your writing, and am enjoying the pace and style. You have a creative storyline going, something new and different. Please don't stop writing!