All Comments on 'Transformations - Witnesses Ch. 01'

I'm not sure if sedatives are mind control. Could it be NonConsent/Reluctance?

This story definitely has potential!! I can't wait for the rest! Keep it up!

On the question of mind control : MC does come into play in the chapters to follow.

No worries, plenty more to follow. Witnesses is a novella at about 50000 words now. Plus there are many short stories on the way set in the same universe. We're just getting started :)

Hi, everyone, just to let you know, there are two more long chapters in the submission queue. It takes a few days for Literotica to approve them. Also, over the next couple of days, I'll be submitting a few Transformations short stories that go along with the books.

Great start.

Not sure what I was expecting here, but this looks like it has potential and now I want to keep reading.