All Comments on 'Transformers: Light of the Day'

by StangStar06

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PTBzzzzPTBzzzzalmost 13 years ago
You can delete this if you want

Sorry I am not into si-fi type stories.

Await your normal sh-thuff.

I did try reading it, doubt you will hear from the others who never like anything,

livnthechilifelivnthechilifealmost 13 years ago

First time reading celebrity. Of course its only because your name is on it. Excellent as always. I love how you took the nuances from the movie of Sam's behavior and incorporated them into a believable story. I really found myself thinking that things could have gone down just like you wrote.

Again great story and thanks for taking me out of LW for awhile and to a category I had ignored all this time because of lack of interest.

B59001B59001almost 13 years ago
Excellent story.

A nice take on the Transformers Saga. Incorporating all those bits throughout the first two films really gives this story a great feel.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
It's better than Billie Jean

But not much.

hawkeye0007hawkeye0007almost 13 years ago
What?

I didn't like this story at all. Not worth the time to read.

cpetecpetealmost 13 years ago

nice break from yourfine LW stuff.

Well done (I still prefer your LW tales)

hodunkhodunkalmost 13 years ago
Very Interesting !

Very different venue for you but a good story. I liked it. Thanks stang

Escobar1974Escobar1974over 12 years ago
They shoud make a movie out of this

This should be a movie, great story, and with her career almost dead I am sure she would act out the sex scenes

Saxon_HartSaxon_Hartover 12 years ago
Pains me to give you less than four....

But, just like the movies this was not all the hype made it. I waited for the first movie to come out on HBO. Fell asleep half way through. Got a pirate copy of the second movie, turned it off when the hot chick became a wierd machine. Won't bother with the third...... Hey, with NFL and NHL networks there's always sports on. Have yet to find a LW story by you I haven't loved.

SH

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Awful

Im a big fan but what was the point. I whish sam reacted more. Oh and megan fox may be a shit aactress but she's anything but average the way u made it sseem 1 star

vikingprincevikingprinceabout 10 years ago
Pretty Damned Amusing

Geez, you managed to even make Transformers interesting...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
glad

glad it was a short one and not even worth the read.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
interesting fan fic

I like how you combined 2 forgotten characters.

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