All Comments on 'Transfusion'

by LesbianChickLit

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GrrrreatImaginationGrrrreatImaginationover 10 years ago
Teasingly good.

Without much trouble, you could do several scenes like this -the first visit (you possibly would have to list it under Erotic Horror), perhaps the second visit, and, if you figure out where this is going, a later visit as their "relationship" moves to another level.

In any event, please write more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

just wonderfully erotic, please keep it going.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
The way you use words...

The way you use words - damn it is breathtaking. So hot.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

WHY SHE VIRGIN?

why_not_jillwhy_not_jillover 9 years ago
yep I need to read all your work..

wow I really enjoy your writing style. I really have a lot to learn.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

thank you i like all your stuff and appreciate your butch chick stuff a lot too

Flawless69BeautyFlawless69Beautyover 8 years ago
Continuation?

I loved this story!! Is there going to be a sequel?

LcnmdLcnmdabout 8 years ago
Oh my!

This is so good! I hope there's more of this story!

Thank you!

L

DocErotic3DDocErotic3Dabout 7 years ago

Fantastic vignette! Stellar writing!

germanchocolate4ugermanchocolate4uover 5 years ago

Oh My Word... I'm almost at a loss for them (almost)

I LOVE lesbian vampire and or werewolf erotica but this one leaves me with a "befuddled combination" (Leschick's words) of aversion and appetite for more "left simultaneously" disappointed and relieve if no continuation.

LesbianChickLit, you're wicked, clever and sensuous. Thanks for the read

TSreaderTSreaderover 4 years ago
Wow!

A great short! Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

As a 'Dracula' and Anne Rice fan , caught me by surprise , glad to have found your story. Very hot , hope to read more soon

DukaaDukaaover 1 year ago

I don't know how I never saw this story of yours until now, but I' glad I finally did! A lovely short-story right before bedtime, for a dream to continue perhaps.

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Looking for beta readers for drafts of new Arete chapters (different narrator, not Taiglox) in revision. If you've time to read and lend a critical eye, please let me know?