All Comments on 'Transgression'

Thoroughly enjoyable, if perhaps a little on the 'heavy' side. You write well -- thank you for sharing an obvious talent with us and welcome to Literotica. Please write more for us and have five stars for a fine effort.

nice. keep it going

Not a hint of caring or affection here, it just reads as a series of demands and an explanation of the carrying out of these demands, about as erotic as a drill sargeant, shouting commands at a clumsy soldier.

I enjoyed all of this. I wasnt looking for gushy emotions but more for commands and that is what I found. But after reading a third and fourth time I started to feel a whole wave of emotion beyond the commands. I was very well pleased with this .