All Comments on 'Transport Ship Arrowhead Ch. 02'

So glad this is an ongoing tale.

The way you have mixed subject matter is absolutly sunblime, a story that would fit in perfectly with any "star trek" type background almost as if cut from the same kind of cloth, and enough sex and exitement to keep anyone perched on the end of their seats, keep writing...

i cant wait for the next one.

If stories are scrappy, I care little about grammar and spelling. Some people don't care either way. I like this story but little errors really trip me up. Can you try to get a proofreader next time?