All Comments on 'Trantor Series Ch. 1'

Please leave your comments and let me know how you liked my story! A writer improves with practice and feedback, so your thoughts are very much invited.

Pyro

This was an excellent story, showing to my mind a very life-like progression from associates to lovers. I also appreciate how respectfully you treated the characters D/s lifestyle. I would add a brief note that while I assume this is fiction, it is inherently unsafe to leave someone dangling from ropes - blood circulation, etc. Aside of that detail, this was an amazing story and I enjoyed it fully.

thank you for your creative efforts!

sure hope there's more to this story it was interesting and creative.