by KnottLynnHardey
From a literary standpoint, this was simply beautiful. You have such a great way of words and a knowledge of how this woman felt. I could keep reading this story for ages. I want to know who Dylan is I want to know what happens to Naomi. I really love finding stories on here like this that keep.me wondering about the aftermath.
From a sexual standpoint, congratulations. You had me shaking.
keep writing it was amazing.
x from Texas
Awesome and very erotic. I would like to know exactly who or even what Dylan was, but it's not something that's necessary to enjoy the story.