All Comments on 'Trapped and Fucked Pt. 01'

Definitely one of my favorite stories! I can't wait for more! Keep it up :)

Sorry, I must of dropped off!

Will try to get to the point faster in part 2 @ 1st Anonymous user, thanks for the feedback.

Thanks for the positive feedback @ 2nd Anonymous user, I really appreciate it.

5 stars loved it!! Can't wait for part 2!!!

excellent work

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This is the description of the sex act?

..didn't give her long to rest before Tim shoved his even bigger dick in and started pounding away. He went at it for a while before roughly rotating her so she was no longer bent ...

Find some words to describe what was going on. What did she feel.

This is like a laundry list of what happened. Not very descriptive or interesting.

Leaving such thoughts as exact dimensions up to the reader may be a better idea. 'F'C cup breasts? What is she grossly obese? Thoughts such as that are what come to my mind, however perhaps they fail to be what the author intended? Think do I.

Where they still stuck in the cave?

Please continue this story is amazing

Oh everybody saints :) What a childish shit! :)

- "Shaved" into the bargain, and of course (as with snotty punks) with: - "Biiiig tits" and "huuuge dick" :):)

Great stuff and really hot!

Can't wait for Part 2!

The breed of dog is Shih-Tzu, not shiatsu.

1 and 2 were good very hot but the third was a slight let down thought it needed alot more you should write a more dude

Made my pussy extremely wet.

Started laughing at F cup breasts and stopped right there.

Outstanding. Excellent plot and descriptions. I like that she will not know who fkd her and made her pregnant. There re so many ways that pregnancy by those she does not know. That premise could be developed in different scenarios. Perhaps breeding her black. Great work.