All Comments on 'Trapped... Ch. 03'

Great story with lots of potential. Am really getting into it. Thanks

This really is interesting :) I'm glad I took the time to read it. Please make more soon :)

Yeah amazing, just amazing man. You have to come back faster with the story. I can't wait that long. I'm impatient man geez....ahhhh the only thing I hated was that you didn't write more and that it ended. I knew this was going to be a interesting story when I first started reading it. Keep it up, get it on. Yesssss.

Wow! I've read all three of your "Trapped" stories today. Your excellent character structure has many of the readers smitten with Virgil and Thistle. You've TRAPPED our imagination and curiosity. The attraction between Thistle and Virgil was given time to develop, nurture and become believable. The pace of their sexual awakening was exceptional. Your plot was opened ever so slowly. Only in this (?final?) and longer chapter were new characters lightly introduced and rapid action takes place. I am unsure if I am understanding your notes from just yesterday... Am I correct that this is not the main story? I deeply hope so. Look forward to so much more from your talented craftsmanship.

Ok, i'm almost done with part 4, so sorry its taken me so long but to be honest I've been lazy x3 and a bit blocked up o.e but i think it should only be a few more days until i post and some random amount of time until it goes up o.e I'm also working on another story that starts straight but then fades to bi with more gay then straight. I also want to take a vote, im thinking of just posting the stories out of order, and maybe doing a mild intro on each just to say the ages, it will however give spoilers but i kind of want to get them out because i keep mentally going back to other stories so im kinda on the edge for it o.e, please tell me if y'all think its a good idea, my email is on my bio thing or just comment on here.-icy