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by VladPuptin

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Skip the "eight inches"

" Glancing at the black case on the floor of the plane." That is not a sentence.

There are a great many grammar ("..causing her and I to gasp... ") and punctuation errors throughout.

"Deal. Although it appears I am a little under-dressed." she queried. There's no question mark so she didn't "query."

"..while the fellatio continued." What fellatio? They're kissing. Do you know what "fellatio" means?

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
HEY annony you dim witted ashole it's asorty on a fucking jerk off

masturbation story! GET A LIFE AND ASTOP WITH THE EMGLISH LESSION!! YOU SOUND LIKE A REAL FUCK BUBBLE

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Wow.

A board troll wrote a story?

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