All Comments on 'Traveling with Charlie'

by oldbob68

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arrowglassarrowglassalmost 7 years ago
Great story....loved it!

Hope you follow this one up with a sequel!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Very good character development

You have introduced two very interesting and compelling characters and implied others. Please keep this story going; it would be a shame to leave it ending for good since it has great potential for a bunch of sequels.

only14u2daonly14u2daalmost 7 years ago
A lovely tale..

What a refreshing tale compelling us to remind ourselves that there is someone for everyone and everyone deserves someone...please continue the story . We would like to travel a lot further with it

mr6x5mr6x5almost 7 years ago
Way to go !

Finally something fresh and it happens to be very similar to an actual event that I was lucky enough to be a part of that I never could get past.... looking forward to more...

sexymeupsexymeupalmost 7 years ago
outstanding

This has to be the best story I ever read on this site, I loved it, would love to see more with the rest of her friends and mom. I gave you five stars.You rarely see a great story like this.Great job, keep up the great work

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
What a load of crap

Sorry, I know this site is for fantasies and I hope you came good and hard while you were writing it, but it's just too unbelievable to be taken seriously

oldbob68oldbob68almost 7 years agoAuthor
Fantasy vs. reality

One mans fantasy may be another mans reality. One never knows.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Ten Inch Cock?

Why do most of the men who write on this site have oversize penises? Vision of grandeur or wishful thinking I guess!

Once in a long while a writer will comment in his story about being just average. Refreshing!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Fun fantasy

In many similar cases, the guy would have woken up in Oklahoma motel to find his money and friend's truck long gone.

MrViixMrViixalmost 3 years ago

Fun story. Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

WONDERFUL STORY. TOO BAD SHE COULDN'T SETTLE DOWN AND HAVE A FAMILY AND RAISE THEM RIGHT. SHE WASN'T, AND ACTUALLY WAS LONELY UNTIL SHE MET THIS MAN...

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Awesome, great story. Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Don't listen to any of the criticisms. Your story made this old doll's pussy drip. That's what I call a recommendation!

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