by oldbob68
Hope you follow this one up with a sequel!!!!!!!
You have introduced two very interesting and compelling characters and implied others. Please keep this story going; it would be a shame to leave it ending for good since it has great potential for a bunch of sequels.
What a refreshing tale compelling us to remind ourselves that there is someone for everyone and everyone deserves someone...please continue the story . We would like to travel a lot further with it
Finally something fresh and it happens to be very similar to an actual event that I was lucky enough to be a part of that I never could get past.... looking forward to more...
This has to be the best story I ever read on this site, I loved it, would love to see more with the rest of her friends and mom. I gave you five stars.You rarely see a great story like this.Great job, keep up the great work
Sorry, I know this site is for fantasies and I hope you came good and hard while you were writing it, but it's just too unbelievable to be taken seriously
One mans fantasy may be another mans reality. One never knows.
Why do most of the men who write on this site have oversize penises? Vision of grandeur or wishful thinking I guess!
Once in a long while a writer will comment in his story about being just average. Refreshing!
In many similar cases, the guy would have woken up in Oklahoma motel to find his money and friend's truck long gone.
WONDERFUL STORY. TOO BAD SHE COULDN'T SETTLE DOWN AND HAVE A FAMILY AND RAISE THEM RIGHT. SHE WASN'T, AND ACTUALLY WAS LONELY UNTIL SHE MET THIS MAN...
Don't listen to any of the criticisms. Your story made this old doll's pussy drip. That's what I call a recommendation!