All Comments on 'Travelling Home Ch. 02'

"Not getting up," he mutters. "Thanks to you and your selfish needs I'm on day 1 again, so I might as well just stay in bed." Aw...this got to me. His sarcasm tinged with truth still can not mask the fact that he is in love. Perfect.

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this is a ten star story ...well worth going its one of the best stories ive read on this site x x x x x x x x

Loved the paragraph with Day 744, especially the last sentence, made me smirk just as I imagine Jordan did when teasing David. Great chapter all together, top score here.

scene the first day at the London hotel was so real and hot. Wonderful story.

i cant believe you referenced gregory peck. he was in my mind while you were listing all those famous people but no one ever brings up gregory peck.youre really awesome ya know? made me smile.

I have ever read on this site. I am speaking about all the Ch's of "Travelling Home". I hope there will be David's story. Thanks "podga"

Thank you sooo much for writing about adults. I like the stories about the young college or high schoolers, but it is so refreshing to read about two mature men still bumbling occasionally, and being human.

Keep up the great writing.

hot. Hot. HOT. And I adore that they're in their mid-40s. I also adore that their passion makes them clumsy. Lucky bastard falls for a gazillionaire!

I am thoroughly enjoying this tale. Your story is a pleasure to read.

... please continue!