All Comments on 'Travelling Home Ch. 04'

i do love this story! thanks for the update :)

That's all I have to say. :o)

This story was totally heart warming. Both characters just made me sigh all the way through. I loved their relationship, their banter, the way you developed them together. The pace of it and the way your wrote it was excellent. I've never been so pleased at a happy ending before. Georgeous.

It will be nice to see a story from David's side. Would you be willing to create it for us, your readers? Of course, using the same writing style, because it is unusual (in the best meaning) and beautiful. I was reading all the Ch's several times and still find them appealing.

Thank you

Time for the truths to come out, past, present and future - and it's impressive how you keep it so controlled with all the pain and fear and emotion and insecurities lurking in this part of the story. Loved it that Benny was so supportive, especially knowing that he will get his reward in the near future (No Other Life series).

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