All Comments on 'Travelling Home Ch. 05'

another new installment. i really enjoyed this sweet & hot story.

PERFECT. So sweet, I loved it!

Something in this story seemed so real, so authentic. I guess it was probably a combination of the background history given to us, the details, and the depth of the characters. The story really sucked me in and I loved every chapter! I hope to see you write more.

This story reminds me of the one by Techan about life on the plains of west texas. I loved the story and hope you write more along the lines. Growing up a farm boy myself, i followed the story to see how accurate i felt it was. You did a great job describing the events and the love shown between all. Keep up the good work.

Loved it. So sweet, so natural, and so sexy. Definitely one of my favorite series.

You are a really great writer!

i loved this story, you're a great writer. I look forward to the next!

wondeful story. Great characters. finally finding the one. it makes my heart swell. thnak you!

I loved this story... it seems so real from Jordan's point of view. You painted a picture of a real person with real insecurities and fears. You are officially one of my favourite writers on Literotica.

that this is the real life story, and if I am right - then this two people were exceptionally lucky to find each other. The story is more then perfect. It's beautiful. Thank you for sharing it with us.

aw i dont want it to end there!

Please keep writing! Your stories are so... realistic and great...

Continuation on the nephew, maybe?

I have loved all of your stories. I hope you will keep writing. They are just wonderful.

I have read all of your stories and this is definitely the best. So real and so good sense of humour. Not much of sex but you managed to make it really hot with just few words. You have a gift for writing. Thank you.

Along with your other ones, too. Please write more!

Totally love these guys. Makes me feel a little more Ok to be pushing 40 and single

You write the kind of stories that remain great, no matter how many times I reread them. Awesome talent!

Can't wait to read more.

I am not in the habit of leaving comments, so I cannot adequately explain why your stories work. They're romantic without being overbearing, amusing without seeming contrived, and poignant without exhausting every potentially meaningful moment. I am not sure whether you have managed to capture reality or a believable fantasy, but thanks for another enjoyable ride.

Wonderful and sweet story. <33

writing. I've read every story umpteen times. Please be busy writing something new!

This is my second reading of this story and I still like it. I am going over to see if you have any other stories for me. Thanks.

Excellent. Simply excellent!

Excellent. Even better the second time around

Maybe its just time of life but I need to believe a relationship like this can exist. Thanks for giving me hope :) x

Wasn't sure about the age group first off, but you converted me in the first chapter. This was really sweet, your characters are very believable and it was really well constructed. Great job! x

You have the whole international businessman angle nailed down pretty tightly. Great story and very sexy.

Swear to God, I just shouted that out loud, with accompanying fist pump, when I read those last six sentences. Damn, you're good!

wow fucking wonderful.? however was hoping it would continue. it took me a while to get into this but it was well worth it. well done. x x x

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So nice than Jordan finally felt secure enough in David's love to admit his own feelings too. And I liked how the sweet hand job pointed back to the first chapter. They really have come home in every way.

It always amazes me that in your stories I look forward to the conversations between the two characters as much as to the hot sex scenes

Sigh...How I wish you were still writing. I love your stories of real people, their talents and their weaknesses, their fears, desires, and need for love.

I have read everything you have written and its all brilliant BUT this one was truly amazing I know for a fact that I will be 're reading it very often. It makes me hope that maybe one day my story will end like that one.

I read this story about a decade ago and liked it, but rereading it now that I'm a bit older, I can really appreciate it. This story was so understated in the best way. It's so quiet and thoughtful. And, I really rooted for them through this whole thing. Both of them are so flawed and real, and I'm sad that this is where I'll have to leave them for now. It's been a while since you've last posted anything, and I don't know if you ever check this account anymore, but even if you never post anything again, I wanted you to know that your stories really mean a lot to me, and there's a reason I have read so many of them multiple times. They really touch a deeper part of me, and every once in a while I'll find myself reflecting on lines you've written or thinking about all the lovely characters you've crafted.

Throughout the story, we read about Jordie traveling and how it's such a significant part of his life. To have him finally settle into a home that he loves with the person that he loves is so fitting. There's a lot of mushy stories out there, but it's your stories that I find the most romantic. It's never saccharine and just feels like a continuation of life and all its mundanities. It's the people we love that make it special. There's so many movies with big airport scenes that are always "epic" or dramatic, but in my eyes, they all pale in comparison to the last scene here. David unexpectedly picking Jordan up at the airport because he couldn't sleep and he missed Jordan? That's where the real love lives.

I'm sure I'll come back here in another ten years to tell you how much I love your writing but until then, I hope you're doing well.

I think I read these stories many many years ago. I was cleaning up bookmarks and came back here again. Lovely writing. I really hoping you are writing for a living. These stories are really beautifully written.