All Comments on 'Travelling To Maine'

The story as okay but you need to find an editor to correct your errors before you submit.

Confusion between homophones (to/too, here/hear), as well as simple misspellings ruin the flow and enjoyment of any story.

A good effort, but rather lacklustre. Maybe checking spellings would be a good idea - i.e. groan not grown might help. If you want people to take the time to read your work, then you should take the time to make sure the spelling and grammar are correct.

Possibly Anal, or Erotic Couplings, but where's the fetish?