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Click hereShe collapsed onto the bed as if she had been totaled drained by the second orgasm. My dick was already becoming soft as it was released from her dark hole. I slide down and on top of her before sliding to her right. I kissed her gently on the shoulder before closing my eyes. She whispered something to me but I couldn't make it out as she trailed off to sleepiness. In a few minutes I had fallen asleep as well.
Through the night I stirred from time to time as she moved. I think I heard her mention something about cleaning the bed before walking away. She was back by the time I had fallen asleep next time and a nice large blanket covered the both of us. The night passed quickly and by the time I woke it was past 4pm. I was already 5 hours behind schedule. As I woke I found her also sleeping still. A quick look outside told me that the rain had already come and gone, and that I should head out soon as well. I slipped into the clothing from last night, now freshly cleaned from what turned out to be a washer/dryer combo machine. As she still slept, I took the time to get her number by pressing the 1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10 code on her phone then I took the time to write her a note before heading out to my truck and driving off to Maine.
Susie woke up about an hour later. She seemed disappointed to not have that man still lying in her bed when she awoke. He had been a good conversation last night at the diner, and a good lay here at home. She grabbed her robe from where she had thrown in one of the times she had gotten up at night and pulled it on without bothering to tie it. It took her a few minutes before finding his note. She cried a bit at it but understood it. Even in the end she wanted him more after reading his message.
Dear Susie,
I'm sorry I had to run out of you babe, but I've got a life waiting for me in Maine. Last night was fun, both the talk we had before, and the time at your house. I don't know if I'll ever pass your part of the world again, but I grabbed your number and I do want to keep in touch. Who knows, maybe you'll pass out here one day. Either way, if it's possible, I'd like to get to know you more, as a friend or more. No matter what, you'll be a memory of life I'll always cherish.
Love,
Eric
It was a cold night and the winds cut at his skin through his jacket and freshly cleaned shirt. He was already lonely but unless he turned around now, there'd be no diner. Not tonight. That waitress was too special to try to replace even if just with words. No, tonight it would just be him, the road, and the memories of Susie.
Possibly Anal, or Erotic Couplings, but where's the fetish?
A good effort, but rather lacklustre. Maybe checking spellings would be a good idea - i.e. groan not grown might help. If you want people to take the time to read your work, then you should take the time to make sure the spelling and grammar are correct.
The story as okay but you need to find an editor to correct your errors before you submit.
Confusion between homophones (to/too, here/hear), as well as simple misspellings ruin the flow and enjoyment of any story.