All Comments on 'Travis and Adam Ch. 02'

I love Adam and Travis and the way they make love with each other, can't wait for the next installment.

dam so hot like the way you are going. Just hope that you are writing the next chapter NOW lol. So like a gay love story . thanks John

This is so HOT! I was glad to see Chap 2 and now must wait for chap 3! I gave you a 5 but don't really understand how a woman can write such a fantastic gay tale. Unless maybe you are trans gendered? Keep up the good work and I'll try to be patient.

Glad emotions are starting to play a big part in this story. The relationship could not last otherwise, and while there are still many hurdles to jump I see them making it.

Two small issues get an editor to proofread the next installment, as the story has some grammar issues that slow the continuity of the story, secondly don't take too long to publish part 3 I had almost forgotten this couple due to length of time between parts 1 and 2.