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Click hereLizzie would be here shortly so I got up and went over to join the women, I'm certain I wouldn't be interested in anything they were discussing but I thought it nice that I join them anyway. JoAnn was a good friend and we all had gotten close to her but the 3 women I loved most were right here at the table and I thought there was nothing better than being here with the 3 of them. I guess it was a little weird to be sitting here with my half naked daughter but it happened often enough over the course of her life that it wasn't unusual anymore. She wasn't wearing any more or any less than her mother or her aunt as the 3 of them had been sitting together. Just like in the beginning when I started seeing my sister, Courtney and their friends sitting here topless most days, it started to become normal. I couldn't let it bother me, our family was as close as it could get and I was happy. I looked over at Courtney and she seemed to know what I was thinking, looking back at me with a broad smile. Almost 20 years married and even longer with each other and not one day during that time had I ever thought we had made a mistake by getting together. I knew she felt the same, and it was a good feeling.
- COMMENTS
Rancher46almost 2 years agoFantastic story. I loved the storyline, the length, and the narrative. There was just enough drama to make it an interesting and intriguing read. I was surprised in the storyline that Alex and Courtney each only had 1 of Travis's children each as there was plenty of chance to have more of Travis's children going forward in the 20+ years the storyline existed. Travis or his sister are portrayed as being in love with each other and I was surprised that the storyline had Alex marrying. and then after no children were conceived, she divorced and returned to the polygamous relationship with Travis and Courtney.
The storyline was excellent, and the writing was very good, with an editor it could have been excellent.
As other readers have stated the story was captivating and hard to put down until you reach the end.
5/5
SAV12over 3 years agoTHIS IS A VERY GOOD STORYLINE BUT IT FELL SHORT OF MY EXPECTATIONS. BY CHAPTER 3, I COULD SEE THE AUTHOR GETTING SIDE TRACKED FROM THE STORIES FIRST DIRECTION TO BECOMING A FUCKEST WITH MULTIPLE WOMEN. THE SEX SCENES WERE TOO LONG AND DRAWN OUT WHERE I FOUND MYSELF SKIPPING SOMETIMES A PAGE JUST TO PICK UP THE NEXT PART OF THE STORY. THE STORY NEEDED TO BE BUILT UPON MORE AND USE LESS SEX. THE ENDING WAS HORRIBLE. I COULD HAVE UNDERSTOOD IF TRAVIS AND COURTNEY CAME TO AN AGREEMENT ABOUT ALEX BECOMING A SISTER WIFE, BUT TO HAVE SEX AFTER THE MARRIAGE WITH THE OTHER GIRLS IS NOT PLAUSIBLE. OPEN MARRIAGES SELDOM WORK FOR VERY LONG. I GAVE HIGH MARKS FOR THE FIRST 3 CHAPTERS, BUT AS AN OVERALL SCORE I CAN ONLY GIVE A SCORE OF 3.5***.
Anonymousover 7 years agosilly things you could have done better if you had proof read the story.. sitting in the son and a few other examples; but I feel guilty bringing it up when I enjoyed the story so much. The sex was ok but the story was about enough other things too. Keep writing, good job kid! Scotty
xiluaabout 8 years agoFantastic story. I liked the pace, length, and narrative. The only put-off for me is that in the story, neither Travis or his sister are portrayed as being in love with each other. They are portrayed as loving each other more than brother and sister; but it is not the same.
This is a first for me; normally, I do not like to read stories that involves so many people having sex (but that is me. Other people might like it). Nonetheless, this story got my attention, since the author manage to do it tastefully, and somehow, semi-believable, although, Travis coming out as semi aloof , nonchalant. Alex and Courtney were a mystery as to what they really thought about Travis taking care of the girls in the group. There was no attent to describe their thoughts about it, and how they really felt.
My thanks to the author for a great effort. There were typos and errors, but they really did not distracted much from the readind.
