All Comments on 'Treasure Ch. 02'

Oh, please let these two fall deeply, madly, passionately in love, & have adorable little dragon babies. That would be the icing on this perfect cake.

PLEASE hurry & update! I can't wait for more!

What an amazing story, I can't wait to read more. You're a fabulous author, you should be proud of yourself!

You guys are awesome and the third one should be out tomorrow. It's super long and I apologize in advance.

I really feel bad for all the other dragons going cuckoo with loneliness. Thankfully,A doesn't have to worry about that!!! MORE MORE MORE!!!!

This was beyond wntrancing. I love your writing, and hate you a little bit for being so damn good. I only wish my writing could approach your level. Continue the excellent work!

That whole "mine, yours" thing seems awfully familiar... Oh wait maybe that's because it's from the other story on this site by that very name. If your words are a homage to that then, neat! But if you're just ripping it off then that's going to be a problem. No down trodding on your work here, because it's masterfully written. But for anyone reading this comment go check out the "Mine...Yours" series 'cause it's pretty great.

I actually wrote this a year ago---far before I had even heard of the Mine...Yours series. That particular dialogue in this chapter was inspired only by sweet things my partner and I say to one another every so often. :) I certainly didn't mean to steal anyone's thunder.

If only I had an Adeon...

What about the first girl that was taken where is she?

Love doesn't involve shackles, kidnapping, and threats. The end.

...dear Anon from 8/17...STFU. It's a fantasy story. He isn't going to mouth loving platitudes and then stalk her on Tinder like you might.

It's fantasy, not real life. And he never hurt or abused her. Love love this story.

Every so often I come back to this story and marvel at the masterful writing it offers. This will be my 7th read through and this chapter still gives me chills while simultaneously making me melt.

I long for the author's return to writing and posting new stories again.

I love this