by Nox661
Really getting good now. I love a story that has depth, and is just not a stroker! You doing well. Please continue asap!
The spekking might be lacking a little bit, but otherwise this is a extraordinary story. I like the tone of it, I like the descriptions, I like where it seems to be going to. But over all I love the topics so far. Keep going.
I may expect some more depth into characters soon, right?
Please finish this story. I'm hoping that you will finish this story line and even go back and finish the "Inheritance" story line. It is a shame that you have started such good stories and not finished them.
Kydo