All Comments on 'Trent Ch. 02: The Shadow Rises'

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Paaradise71Paaradise71about 9 years ago
Love it!

Really getting good now. I love a story that has depth, and is just not a stroker! You doing well. Please continue asap!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Nex

Interesting to say the least, I'll look out for further chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

The spekking might be lacking a little bit, but otherwise this is a extraordinary story. I like the tone of it, I like the descriptions, I like where it seems to be going to. But over all I love the topics so far. Keep going.

I may expect some more depth into characters soon, right?

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Finish the story

Please finish this story. I'm hoping that you will finish this story line and even go back and finish the "Inheritance" story line. It is a shame that you have started such good stories and not finished them.

Kydo

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